When You Go Too Far With Ink?

Good morning friends! Thought I’d lost this piece when I added the black lines to the side, but the experimenting worked, and after a bit of white pen (I love the Gelly Roll pens so much!) It really worked for me. What do you think? Too heavy on the black ink this time?

Ink brush pen and watercolor paints on A4 watercolour paper 

I am an abstract artist in the UK, specialising in inks and watercolour paints. Art for sale, message for prices.